Before we goto lake,father to order lock the door,we by truck yelllow and theen we goto city ,we see people thin just pull the dog and theen we goto home grandmother,father to order for knock the door home grandmother ,on there we see people hit ball and i see elephant just eating beans and tomatos on there i to send letter,to sister on library i see globe.
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Nice story to share ... please use Past Verbs: like GO = WENT, SEE = SAW ...
BalasHapusTalking about holidays, it would be more interesting to travel long distance and see the beauty of nature ...
BalasHapusThis may be your story after corrected.
BalasHapus"Before we went to a lake, my father ordered me to lock the door. we went by yellow truck and then we went to the city. We saw a thin people who was just pulling the dog and then we went to my grandmother's house. My father ordered me to knock the door. There we saw people hitting ball and I saw elephant eating beans and tomatos. After that I sent a letter to my sister."